Have just been looking on a real estate agency website curious as to what kind of houses are currently available on the market. This is the first sentence from a house description
From the moment you step foot into this charming double storey Victorian terrace your invigorated with a feeling of tranquility.
Is there something wrong with me if that kind of commentary just totally pisses me off and would completely put me off using these agents because of it? I would consider the term 'invigorated with tranquility' as being a complete oxymoron, the experience of being invigorated does not leave one feeling tranquil! Apart from that though, it should obviously say you're invigorated, not your.
It goes on to make further appalling errors in spelling and syntax. Apparently the place has a stainless steal kitchen and each bedroom has there own built in robes. Due to the fact that the author has obviously never seen a comma before, apparently the balcony has a full bathroom.
It's just sloppy and it says to me that the author is an idiot, professional commentaries like this, especially ones that are trying to encourage people to spend one million dollars, should not look like they have been written by a Mongolian nomad child with learning difficulties.
If I was the vendor I would take my business elsewhere.
Have no doubt this is not an isolated case.
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